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ROUTINE MATTERS by Susan Gibb

5/4/2010

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Why is it always up to me to pour the olive oil from the 3-liter tin into the smaller bottle? To wash out the butter dish and place a new stick on the tray? It’s all these messy things I’m left to do, as if I were the only one with nimble fingers and the knowing where supplies are kept.

I vacuum up the salt that’s fallen from his pretzels beneath the cushion of his leather chair. I dust the pile of magazines that have expired. It’s silent in the house, as if these things like laundry need be done alone. As if the whispers of the day should not intrude upon the solitude of daily, weekly, we’ve-run-out-of-this-or-that chores and checks to write for heat and electricity. 

I tsk my tongue in wonder, then remember; he’s really left for good this time.


Susan Gibb is a reader, has-been publisher and editor, and writer of fiction and poetry in various form. Her work has appeared in The New River Review, elimae, Bewildering Stories, The Blue Print Review, and fourpaperletters among other fine literary journals.

11 Comments
Michael Solender link
5/3/2010 11:09:24 pm

Ha! This is delicious Susan, well done.

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susan link
5/4/2010 07:51:00 pm

Thank you, Michael--I'm so glad you read and enjoyed it.

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Finnegan Flawnt link
5/4/2010 10:44:14 pm

excellent, susan, really enjoyed this. it got me thinking, too...

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HZar Worth
5/4/2010 10:53:33 pm


Your piece reminds me why fiction shall always remain necessary, Susan. The space for the mind to explore was delicious, Susan. Thank you.

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Michael Dickes
5/4/2010 11:22:11 pm

Susan,

Well done. Excellent description. The twist poked me in the heart and made me sad, but that is the goal, ya? To poke, prod or pacify the reader's heart?

as if these things like laundry need be done alone.

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Martha link
5/5/2010 12:39:33 am

I was nodding all the way though and then met the last line and laughed out loud. Excellent.

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Douglas Campbell
5/6/2010 03:30:12 am

Excellent piece, with its telling details and its sad twist.

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susan link
5/10/2010 02:58:24 am

Thank you all so much for reading and commenting. This one goes through the mind of so many people I think.

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Katrina Gray link
5/20/2010 10:15:20 am

Splendid, Susan. The last line stunned me, and gave new depth to the the preceding paragraphs, which I just had to read again.

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gaydegani
5/24/2010 09:45:21 am

Yes Susan. This is great. And as Katrina says above, to be enjoyed over again. Deep and deeper.

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